Feedback

Final Feedback – Team 12 · Looks great! I like your visuals and the poll. Nice job. Very visually appealing. Arguments Page: · Very impressive. I like how you’ve even embedded clip art in some of the white space to break up the text. Nicely done. Also visually appealing. It appears that Madison is your expert researcher. Nice! || · Also, Kelsey – I’ll be anxious to hear what you say about the topic. Please post your editorial. || · __Madison [song] __Great lyrics! I’ll be anxious to hear the song when it goes live! · __Elysiana [blog] __Nice start. I did notice an excess amount of white space on your page linking readers to your blog. Can you post something appropriate to soak up some of that whiteness? Also… see if you can ask some of your team mates to post a comment on your blog to give it more substanace. · __Kelsey [??] __ Nothing’s registered as a project. ||  Link checker  []  || Yes! ||
 * **Criteria ** || <span style="color: black; font-family: "Century Gothic","sans-serif"; font-size: 8pt;">Comments   ||
 * **<span style="color: black; font-family: "Century Gothic","sans-serif"; font-size: 9pt;">Phase 1 **<span style="color: black; font-family: "Century Gothic","sans-serif"; font-size: 9pt;"> Requirements (e.g. title, arguments, etc). || <span style="font-family: "Century Gothic","sans-serif"; font-size: 9pt;">Home Page:
 * **<span style="color: black; font-family: "Century Gothic","sans-serif"; font-size: 8pt;">Phase 2 **<span style="color: black; font-family: "Century Gothic","sans-serif"; font-size: 8pt;"> Requirements (editorials) ||  · <span style="font-family: "Century Gothic","sans-serif"; font-size: 8pt;">Three of your editorials are done and posted. I would recommend that you each make sure your name and titles are consistently placed…either in the middle or on the left side. Having the eye jump back and forth over text is a bit disconcerting.
 * **<span style="color: black; font-family: "Century Gothic","sans-serif"; font-size: 8pt;">Phase 3 **<span style="color: black; font-family: "Century Gothic","sans-serif"; font-size: 8pt;"> Requirements (projects) ||  · __<span style="font-family: "Century Gothic","sans-serif"; font-size: 9pt;">Zach [Video / local news reporter] __<span style="font-family: "Century Gothic","sans-serif"; font-size: 9pt;"> - This is positively amazing! And I owe you a huge apology, Zach. I have learned a huge lesson…never underestimate the power of a middle schooler! This is great J <span style="font-family: "Century Gothic","sans-serif"; font-size: 9pt;"> Will you consider allowing us to showcase your video on celebration day? It’s really good!
 * **<span style="color: black; font-family: "Century Gothic","sans-serif"; font-size: 8pt;">Phase 4 **<span style="color: black; font-family: "Century Gothic","sans-serif"; font-size: 8pt;"> Revisions ||   ||
 * * <span style="font-family: "Century Gothic","sans-serif"; font-size: 8pt;">Proofread || <span style="font-family: "Century Gothic","sans-serif"; font-size: 9pt;">You’re in pretty good shape. One last read for mistakes would catch the few that remain!   ||
 * * <span style="font-family: "Century Gothic","sans-serif"; font-size: 8pt;">Published, professional appearance || <span style="font-family: "Century Gothic","sans-serif"; font-size: 9pt;">Yes, very nicely done. Please consider adding more visuals to your project pages especially. Spend some time making them look more ‘flashy’ and complete! You have the hard part done—just embellish with color, size, pictures, etc.   ||
 * * <span style="font-family: "Century Gothic","sans-serif"; font-size: 8pt;">All links, graphics, sounds, etc. are working
 * * <span style="font-family: "Century Gothic","sans-serif"; font-size: 8pt;">Make sure only first names are present and no school district names used || <span style="font-family: "Century Gothic","sans-serif"; font-size: 9pt;">A-ok!  ||
 * * <span style="font-family: "Century Gothic","sans-serif"; font-size: 8pt;">Purpose of website is clear
 * <span style="font-family: "Century Gothic","sans-serif"; font-size: 8pt;">The content is written clearly and concisely
 * <span style="font-family: "Century Gothic","sans-serif"; font-size: 8pt;">Creativity is demonstrated
 * <span style="font-family: "Century Gothic","sans-serif"; font-size: 8pt;">Content and language are appropriate for website topic and audience || <span style="font-family: "Century Gothic","sans-serif"; font-size: 9pt;">Well done, group! Thanks for your hard work on this website. You should all be proud of your accomplishments J <span style="font-family: "Century Gothic","sans-serif"; font-size: 9pt;"> You are all well on your way to a really polished website. Nice job!!!  ||

<span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; font-style: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">**PHASE 3 FEEDBACK FORM** Phase 2 Feedback Form
 * <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; font-style: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">**Project Requirements** || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; font-style: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">**Completed/Comments** ||
 * <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; font-style: normal; font-weight: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Project Information Page Complete and Updated for each team member || Done! You're completely caught up with each page...I am just waiting to see the CD cover for the original song. Everything else is great ;) ||
 * <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; font-style: normal; font-weight: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">A new page has been created for each team member’s project || Yes! ||
 * <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; font-style: normal; font-weight: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Each team member’s project is beginning to take shape as evidenced by the action plan and completed student survey. || Yes! ||
 * <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; font-style: normal; font-weight: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Evidence that other team members have either provided feedback or contributed to the success of the project. || Yes! ||
 * <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; font-style: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">**Team Communication** ||  ||
 * <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; font-style: normal; font-weight: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Evidence that your team is using the discussion tab to communicate. || I don't see a lot of evidence that you're communicating through this tool. ||
 * <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; font-style: normal; font-weight: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Evidence that all team members are participating either via communication and/or changes to the pages. || I don't see a lot of evidence that you're communicating through this tool. ||
 * <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; font-style: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">**Phases 1 & 2 - Actions on Feedback** ||  ||
 * <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; font-style: normal; font-weight: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Phase 1 feedback has been addressed and changes are evident. || You're in good shape! Nicely done, team! ||
 * <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; font-style: normal; font-weight: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Phase 2 Feedback has been addressed and changes are evident. || Well done ... you should be proud of your efforts :) ||


 * <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; font-style: normal; margin-bottom: 0pt; margin-top: 0pt; text-align: center; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">**Editorial Requirements** || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; font-style: normal; margin-bottom: 0pt; margin-top: 0pt; text-align: center; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">**Completed/Comments** ||
 * <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; font-style: normal; font-weight: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Each team member has posted their editorial on the wiki. || Done! ||
 * <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; font-style: normal; font-weight: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Each team member submitted their editorial to a local newspaper || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; font-style: normal; font-weight: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">**Information will be gathered from the teacher** ||
 * <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; font-style: normal; font-weight: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">If editorial was published in newspaper, evidence of that is included. || I didn't see evidence of published editorials. ||
 * **<span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; font-style: normal; margin-bottom: 0pt; margin-top: 0pt; text-align: center; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Team Communication ** ||  ||
 * <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; font-style: normal; font-weight: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Evidence that your team is using the discussion tab to communicate || Yes, but not a great deal ||
 * <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; font-style: normal; font-weight: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Evidence that all team members are participating either via communication and/or changes to the page. || yes...but you're all very busy. It's tough to keep everything up in the air when you've got so many other things going on at the same time. Keep communication lines open :) ||
 * **<span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; font-style: normal; margin-bottom: 0pt; margin-top: 0pt; text-align: center; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Phase 1 - Actions on Feedback ** ||  ||
 * <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; font-style: normal; font-weight: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Evidence that the team as addressed the feedback from phase 1. ||  ||

<span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; font-style: normal; font-weight: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;"> Remember you will need at least 5 different types of sources || work in progress... looks like you're done with this component! ||
 * <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; font-style: normal; margin-bottom: 0pt; margin-top: 0pt; text-align: center; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">**Home Page Requirements** || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; font-style: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Comments/Completed ||
 * <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; font-style: normal; font-weight: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Title is present || yes ||
 * <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; font-style: normal; font-weight: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Team member’s names (no last names please) || yes! ||
 * <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; font-style: normal; font-weight: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Position Statement is present || yes ||
 * <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; font-style: normal; font-weight: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Catchy introductory paragraph complete || Make sure your stance is backed up by some research - and then use the researcher's data...[particularly that of high school drop outs. Do you know how many would have graduated?] ||
 * <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; font-style: normal; font-weight: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Supporting visual on home page is in place. || yes. But check to see if you have permission to use AP photos... make sure it's cited properly if you're allowed to use them. I'm not sure and will check - but your team should check as well. ||
 * **<span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; font-style: normal; margin-bottom: 0pt; margin-top: 0pt; text-align: center; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Arguments Page Requirements ** ||  ||
 * <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; font-style: normal; font-weight: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Title is present || I like the quote! ||
 * <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; font-style: normal; font-weight: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Chart containing at least 10 statements based on research (remember you should have at least 15 when complete) || work in progress... looks like you're done with this component! ||
 * <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; font-style: normal; font-weight: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Research coming from a variety of sources (journals, magazines, blogs, etc.)
 * <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; font-style: normal; font-weight: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Works cited entries accurate and correct for each piece of research || Done! Yeah! work in progress... looks like you're done with this component! ||
 * <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; font-style: normal; font-weight: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Visual of some sort to support and enhance your message || not yet Great visual! ||
 * <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; font-style: normal; font-weight: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Arguments present come from research--NOT student opinions! Just the facts please. || so far these look good ||
 * **<span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; font-style: normal; margin-bottom: 0pt; margin-top: 0pt; text-align: center; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Team Communication ** ||  ||
 * <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; font-style: normal; font-weight: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Evidence that your team is using the discussion tab to communicate || yes...this is apparent ||
 * <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; font-style: normal; font-weight: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Evidence that all team members are participating either via communication and/or changes to the page. || yes ||